This time the song is fuller. In this track I try to feel out the chorus a little bit, but I have no idea what notes to set it to, and no idea whether it could work. L, give me some feedback. I like the song this way with more breaks between piano notes—obviously we'll need to throw in some keeler guitar. Full 2 minutes.
The video is 2004 in review.
6 comments:
Are you doing both voices? I like this version. I think it'll work. Atta Kid!
I did do both voices, but in the future you will get to do one. Thanks for the vote of confidence. Can't wait for that keeler guitar!
Notes for song improvement and maintainance:
•don't start with both voices—add the second later
•I love having a verse with no music—just the two voices, maybe drums
•the chorus, however, needs music
•keeler guitar
•Add a segue like unto "She was your sacrifice" to another verse that doesn't lead into chorus
•I also love how the last verse comes in out of nowhere—sounds good to me
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•real drums someday
•live and less tracky someday—little breaks and jazz beats to break out of the rigidity binding this song
Many dreams for the song. Once the amp is hear we can make them become a reality.
keep it up... I like what I'm hearing and seeing
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